Apple E-mail Redesign

Improved CTA visibility & hierarchy

Project Overview

The purpose is to evaluate and improve the user experience of a survey invitation email received from Apple Recruiting.

This case study highlights usability issues in the email’s layout, clarity, and CTA visibility, and proposes a user-centered redesign.
Read time:
5 Minute

Problem

  • Unclear CTA: The most critical action (“Start” link) is buried and styled as body text, making it easy to miss.

  • Visual hierarchy is weak: No scannable structure, so everything feels like a wall of text.

  • High cognitive load: User must read the whole email to find out what to do.

  • Poor affordance: No button or highlight to draw attention.

  • Misaligned with Apple’s usual sleek, intuitive standards.

UX Heuristics Violated

Visibility of system status:
The email doesn’t immediately show what action is expected.
Recognition over recall:
The CTA is not visually recognizable as a clickable action.
Aesthetic and minimalist design:
The design is plain but not functional. Minimalism shouldn't sacrifice usability.
User control and freedom:
No alternate CTA or scannable summary that helps user act quickly.

Suggested Improvements

a. Improved Visual Hierarchy
  • Break content into digestible sections with headers.
  • Add bullet points or bold highlights for key messages.
b. Stronger CTA Visibility
  • Replace the "Start" link with a primary button — large, high contrast.
  • Position the button right below the first paragraph (above the fold).
c. Reduce Cognitive Load
  • Move important content to the top.
  • Use plain, concise language.
  • Summarize the purpose and ask in 1-2 lines max.

Findings